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mamuzzy ([personal profile] mamuzzy) wrote2025-11-16 06:25 pm

[HARD CONTACT] Chapter 2: Etain

|| Republic Commando: Hard Contact || 2004 || Book series || Military, Sci-Fi || 18+ for violence and harrowing themes || 

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Zey picked up again. “And let me assure you that we’ve been searching diligently for them. We have a location for our targets, but no plans of the buildings. The lack of plans will make your retrieval and sabotage task more challenging, as will the communications situation. Questions?”
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A holochart blossomed into three dimensions in her cupped hands, then another, then another. She had layouts of half a dozen Neimoidian and Separatist buildings in the surrounding region, because Fulier hadn’t been the only one who was careless. After a few bottles of urrqal, the local construction workers dropped their guard.
Etain was neither a natural warrior nor a great charmer, but she was aware of her talent for spotting opportunities. It made up for a lot.
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GOOD GIRL. BEST GIRL. BESTEST GIRL. MY SMART GIRL. I LOVE YOU. 

It is really worth to pay attention to the POVs. Because Etain tends to talk down on herself and I wonder if these negative remarks also come from other character's pov as well, or only from hers. Because so far it seems, she really lacks of self-esteem despite the proof is THERE that she is very much capable. 

But also the literal shitshow just never ends for her, poor girl :DDD

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That quantity of barq was a week’s earnings for these people. “You shouldn’t have gone to that trouble for me,” Etain said, embarrassed.
“You’re a guest,” the woman said. “Besides, once I’d scraped the dung off, shame to waste the grains stuck to it, eh? Oh-ah.”
Etain’s stomach rolled but she kept a steady expression. Coruscant’s food hygiene regulations certainly didn’t apply here.
“Very kind of you,” she said, and forced a smile.
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